Choke on your lies (new song) DRAFT!

I wrote this in about an hour, so I will work on it, but see what you think. =)
It's a bit of an emo song (sorry) and there is a little bit of screamo. It wasn't really inspired by much, but I guess my experiences in the past played a part in it. But really, this is an hour's work, so don't expect anything wonderful!

VERSE ONE

The blood drips onto the bathroom floor
You don’t know what you’re living for
Want to let go
Sitting in silence barely crying
I curl up there and hope I’m dying
I can’t say no

CHORUS

I hope you choke on your lies
Bow down to defeat
When the world comes down
To a fucking scream
You can fantasize
About all those who die
Cos they don’t know what it is
And why it is we lie

VERSE TWO

They’re scars from my broken heart
The days when I thought I was smart
Those days are gone
I thought I knew it all back then
I hoped that I could play pretend
With you, oh you…

CHORUS

I hope you choke on your lies
Bow down to defeat
When the world comes down
To a fucking scream
You can fantasize
About all those who die
Cos they don’t know what it is
And why it is we lie

BRIDGE

Cutting off the blood to my veins
Never feeling the slightest bit ashamed
Here I am
You don’t understand
Bring me down

I never thought I was strong enough
Looks like I was right

CHORUS

I hope you choke on your lies
Bow down to defeat
When the world comes down
To a fucking scream
You can fantasize
About all those who die
Cos they don’t know what it is
And why it is we lie
I hope you choke on your lies (your lies, your lies, your lies)
Bow down to defeat (oh, defeat, bowing at my feet)
When the world comes down
To a fucking scream


I hope you choke on your lies
Bow down to defeat
When the world comes down
To a fucking scream
You can fantasize
About all those who die
Cos they don’t know what it is
And why it is we lie

BRIDGE

Cutting off the blood to my veins
Never feeling the slightest bit ashamed
Here I am
You don’t understand
Bring me down